Friday, 1 February 2008


ciklon se bliža
vrana brska
po odtoku

17 comments:

Anonymous said...

Oh lordy Polona it is soooo true.

Masago said...

I hope he doesn't feel too sad. :-)

Anonymous said...

Wandering over the scene, one wonders - where is the connection? ... trying hard to reach into the crow's mind... well composed!

Anonymous said...

(In the immortal words of my students ...) Why you sad?fhykymw

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

Sadness and yet hope. There are things in life that are meant to e simplistic because to make them complicated makes them meaningless. You do a beautiful jo with this.

T

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

been there, done that :)

floots said...

that "sink"ing feeling perhaps :)
says a lot about us all
thank you

John McDonald said...

liked this one
john

jem said...

There is a great sense of resignation in this. We each go about our business, making the most of whatever comes our way. You've packed a lot into this. Well done.

Anonymous said...

grozno, a ne... ta ciklon... Upamo lahko le, da ne bo predolgo trajal. Sicer sem pa prav včeraj doživela in novo spoznanje o naši omejenosti glede na čas, vreme... Bom spisala na to temo, ker je bilo intenzivno, vendar mogoče šele jutri... Sem "ciklonsko" utrujena... ;)))))))))))))

Imej se fajn. Izdrži. Lucija

polona said...

hat: is it really?

masago: surely not if he finds something useful...

višnja: perhaps the water will bring something useful? ;)
thank you

quilly: nobody sad. bad weather, s'all

inside our hands...: yes, and animals 'know' these things. we humans tend to complicate...
thank you.

andrew: yep...;)

floots: you have a way of saying things...
thank you

john: thank you

jem: yes, i've had a rather difficult week and there was a weather change (the actual inspiration for this one) so i really didn't have much choice ... but i wanted to end it on an up note

lucija: ma, se mi zdi, da sem vedno bolj vremenska... včeraj se zbudila z glavobolom (redko pri meni) in cel dan nisem čisto prišla k sebi... eh, bo že bolje...
drži se!

DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

tako nic pesnisko sporoclo, bi rekli na prvi vtis, pa vendar je v njem odesev narave v svoji prabiti:))))

Res dobro.

Bodi lepo, Polona.

polona said...

odsev narave v svoji prabiti... kako lepa definicija haikuja!
hvala neikka, objem!

Pat Paulk said...

Rummaging through the crap in my brain leaves me depressed. Excellent Polona!!

polona said...

pat: unique as always! thank you!

Elena Horowitz-Brookes said...

You've captured the sense of sadness with your words. You've added a story which touches the heart.

polona said...

i'm glad you can find all this in my simple haiga, boulies.
thank you.