Wednesday, 30 July 2008



kratke sence
drevo izpusti
oblak

14 comments:

VILINČEK said...

Zanimiv haiku.

Vse dobro ti želim.

Magyar said...

Ah yes, the freed cloud... changing shape as it pulls away. _m

Phyllis Hunt McGowan said...

It looks like the tree just spat out the cloud... funny what different people see in clouds.
This is lovely.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I like your idea! :)

Masago said...

Nice (without the caption, it might appear as if the trees were about to take a bite). :-)

Crafty Green Poet said...

oh lovely, I love to watch clouds emerging from behind trees...

Anonymous said...

The cloud should have known better than to get in the tree in the first place!

John McDonald said...

great one
john

jem said...

Good one, made me smile. I wonder if nearby there is another tree, waiting to catch the cloud. Perhaps they are playing a game?

Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...

A beauty, and a poem drifts loose from Polona. Hope you are well.

Tikkis said...

The last word is oblak .-)

Anonymous said...

o, v tvojem stilu... všeč mi je, zelo všeč

DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, ooooooo, ooo,,,

lepo!!!

lbn

d smith kaich jones said...

Very cool.