Monday, 8 October 2007

*5-7-5 isn't exactly my stile but this one sort of wrote itself like that
*different word order and connotation in slovene version (and more than 17 syllables)


nad blatnimi tlemi
ujeta v pajkovo mrežo
sončna svetloba

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

Lepa projekcija, Polona!
Ulovi žarek - kar danes!

Al

Masago said...

Nicely done...it's satisfying when that falls into place.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

this one is amazing! I love the photo.

floots said...

great conbo
the pic is fantastic

Crafty Green Poet said...

Excellent combination!

Anonymous said...

Breathtaking. Every time I pick a favorite you bring out another dazzling image.

Janice Thomson said...

Wow I love that photo Polona! What a great blend of words and pic.

get zapped said...

What a splendid shot! Love the colors and suspense.

Ashi said...

Nice doing Polona,even if the word hadn't come in 5-7-5, as it did. Lovely photo too.

polona said...

alenka: hvala, tudi tebi jih želim čim več!

masago: it just happened to... thank you

andrew: thank you!

floots: much appreciated, thank you.

crafty green poet: thank you.

quilly: oh, that's most kind. thank you

john: thank you

janice: many thanks.

get zapped: i appreciate that. thanks

thank you, ashi.

Anonymous said...

Tudi jaz ulovila malega pajkeca in žarek. Tudi pri Alenki sem videla pajkeca... dobro se dopolnjujeta. Kot kakšno prerokovalki usode... napeto :)

NOčko!

dsnake1 said...

love the details in the foto, amazing! 5-7-5 or otherwise, i still like those words.

think i will stick around a while :)

DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

uauuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!

Uau!

Pozdrav, neikka.

polona said...

vilinček: na splošno nimam nič proti pajkom in drugim insektom, dokler me pustijo pri miru :)
hvala za obisk in prijazen komentar.
bodi lepo!

dsnake: that's most kind, thank you.
don't get caught in a web!

neikka: ooooo, to pa je komentar! :)))
vse lepo!

Bill said...

I just let those 5-7-5's happen when they come along