Tuesday, 11 September 2007

warming up
for the first time
this september
i hear cicada song...
tentatively

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ogreva se
prvikrat
v tem septembru
slišim škržata...
neodločno

14 comments:

Janice Thomson said...

Leaves are falling and finally we are getting a taste of summer - can relate to this so well. Love your words here Polona.

jem said...

More haiku that present similarities and differences of our worldview. The last one with chilly gulls I can step into easily, and part of this one - some warms days here, but no cicada in England.

Anonymous said...

I didn't know cicada knew any tentative songs!

floots said...

glad you've found some warmth :)

Anonymous said...

I'm with Quilly.
Cicada? Tentative?!
Stay warm.

get zapped said...

Very uplifting piece. I'm happy for you ;)

Masago said...

Made me smile. :-)

John McDonald said...

lovely work
john

magiceye said...

tentative beginnings.....lovely....lovely

Pat Paulk said...

At night we're starting to cool off. Definitely a tentative start,

Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...

Beautiful. What a picture you paint with words, Polona.

polona said...

everyone, thank you for your comments. you'll understand i don't have the time to answer individually.
anyway, we've been having possibly the coldest beginning of september ever here on this island and i HATE cold, so...
still don't know when i'll return, though.

gautami tripathy said...

How I like the images created by this!

DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

:)

Občutek morja sem začutila med dlanmi...

Krasno.

Bodi lepo, Polona.

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