Tuesday, 14 August 2007



odjek korakov
vrabček izgine
v koruzi

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

Are you the sparrow? Am I the approaching footsteps?
(looks around...sadly shuffles back to Buffalo)
heh heh

This was lovely Polona (big surprise). Now come out of your den. I promise not to threaten a visit for at least...well, until I win the lottery.

Masago said...

Looks like an easy place to disappear into. :-) Nice one.

floots said...

amaizing (sorry) :)

jem said...

I had one of those misreading moments where I read maize as maze - and I went into a train of thought of a sparrow trying to lead you into or out of a maze. But the haiku works great your way too :)

John McDonald said...

lovely one
john

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

Floots stole my idea! :)

Janice Thomson said...

I like this Polona. I'd be like the sparrow too disappearing at the sound of footsteps...

get zapped said...

nice imagery of a moment...

polona said...

hat: oh my... it does look like that, doesn't it! sorry...
thank you and... do win that lottery!

masago: even for something bigger than a bird...
thanks

floots: nothing like old corny jokes :))

jem: well, i think it could work either way :)
thank you

john: thank you

andrew: appreciate that nonetheless :)

janice: we all do that at times, no?
thank you

get zapped: thank you

dsnake1 said...

i thought i spotted a typo, silly me. :)

polona said...

dsnake: oh, they happen alright but not this time :)

Bill said...

footsteps
a squirrel circles
into itself

polona said...

nice response, bill.
thank you.

Amalendu said...

lovely...

polona said...

thank you.