Saturday, 12 May 2007


previously published in Simply Haiku Spring 2007


jutro
zaliv se razsvetli
čoln za čolnom

17 comments:

Masago said...

A lovely observation.

gautami tripathy said...

Beautifully put...

floots said...

i agree with masago
a wonderfully "lateral" obsevation

Ashi said...

Lovely - full of atmosphere.

John McDonald said...

yes lovely
john

magiceye said...

LOVE IT...

DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

Si pa ujela pravo regato jadrnic...

Veliko uspeha pri objavah ti zeim, polona.

Objem, neikka.

Pat Paulk said...

I love it!! Like tiny teaspoons of sugar in a cup of tea.

Anonymous said...

With your words, I could see the little boats appearing like light bulbs as the rising sun reflected off of them.

dsnake1 said...

wow! this is beautiful!
i like the words, as if the boats appear magically one by one at sunrise. :)

polona said...

masago: thank you.

gautami: thanks.

floots: thank you.
cheers

ashi: thank you.

john: thanks

magiceye: thank you!

neikka: tele so bile kar parkirane pred hotelom v Komiži, posnetek pa je jutranji iz moje sobe :)
hvala!

pat: men's thing?
thank you!

kai: thank you!

quilly: not exactly like that but the view was quite beautiful...

dsnake: many thanks!
the boats' presence could be felt all the time but the light as the sun rose from behind a hill was quite amazing...

Anonymous said...

Temptress!

Anonymous said...

Komiža - nerealizirane sanjarije... Sporočilno... in kot vedno - lepo...

Objem, Lucija

get zapped said...

Fantastic! I can see each lighting up.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

This is beautiful!

polona said...

sorry, charlie... can't say it wasn't intended, though :o)

lucija: le pojdi, pojdita enkrat... je res lepo!
objem!

get zapped: thank you.

andrew: many thanks!

Crafty Green Poet said...

I love watching the sunlight move across water like that. Lovely.