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Layers of metaphor in this one. I love it so so much.
Wonderful one, Polona!Love it!
yup, evangeline's right...
Kako super! kako dobri, kratki verzi. Piši malo daljše misli še kdaj, Polona.
Too warm and too cold all at once.
ohh..that makes a hard day to think about - well hit.
I love this one --- I wish it was "too warm" here!
perfect juxtapositioni can feel the chill of the moment
Great one, Polona. The line "it's over" is so packed with meaning. It closes the poem well, but opens us to the reality of change and our true shifting nature. How zen!
Frigid on a warm day..
mood swings....wow
thank heavens those clouds aren't a little more purple polona or you'd 'a had me crying today... very lovely
Oh. Jaz pa čutim samo mraz tistih zadnjih besed.
Interesting emotional and visual textures to this piece, Polona. Gives one pause.
How sad and beautiful...gorgeous pic.
evangeline: seems we have much in common. many thanks.margie: thank you! take caremattm: much appreciated. thank you.neikka: torej ti je všeč tanka?ah, kobi bilo odvisno od mene... tako pa navdi pride ali pa ne...charlie: true.but then again, i never said what it was that was over (there is also a possibility of a brighter outcome)qd: yes.steve: just life, 's all (it doesn't have to be the worst case scenario). thank you.andrew: i would love to send you some warmth... butthere'sa possibility of snow next week (too much snow even)floots: many thanksdon: i'm glad you picked other meanings, too. thnak you.grish: it happens... thanksmagiceye: appreciate that. thank you.amy: oh, that's a swet thing to say.sometimes tears have a cleansing effect...aleks: ja. čeprav konec ne pomeni nujno nekaj slabega (a največkrat najprejpomislimo prav na to)...hvala tikai: ty :-)mb: a perceptive observation. thank you.bre: glad this worked for you. thank you.
Oh, oh...
vanishingas it touches earthsnowflake
masago: :-)bill: how beautifulthank you!
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Layers of metaphor in this one. I love it so so much.
Wonderful one, Polona!
Love it!
yup, evangeline's right...
Kako super! kako dobri, kratki verzi. Piši malo daljše misli še kdaj, Polona.
Too warm and too cold all at once.
ohh..that makes a hard day to think about - well hit.
I love this one --- I wish it was "too warm" here!
perfect juxtaposition
i can feel the chill of the moment
Great one, Polona. The line "it's over" is so packed with meaning. It closes the poem well, but opens us to the reality of change and our true shifting nature. How zen!
Frigid on a warm day..
mood swings....wow
thank heavens those clouds aren't a little more purple polona or you'd 'a had me crying today... very lovely
Oh. Jaz pa čutim samo mraz tistih zadnjih besed.
Interesting emotional and visual textures to this piece, Polona. Gives one pause.
How sad and beautiful...gorgeous pic.
evangeline: seems we have much in common. many thanks.
margie: thank you!
take care
mattm: much appreciated. thank you.
neikka: torej ti je všeč tanka?
ah, kobi bilo odvisno od mene... tako pa navdi pride ali pa ne...
charlie: true.
but then again, i never said what it was that was over (there is also a possibility of a brighter outcome)
qd: yes.
steve: just life, 's all (it doesn't have to be the worst case scenario). thank you.
andrew: i would love to send you some warmth... butthere'sa possibility of snow next week (too much snow even)
floots: many thanks
don: i'm glad you picked other meanings, too. thnak you.
grish: it happens... thanks
magiceye: appreciate that. thank you.
amy: oh, that's a swet thing to say.
sometimes tears have a cleansing effect...
aleks: ja. čeprav konec ne pomeni nujno nekaj slabega (a največkrat najprejpomislimo prav na to)...
hvala ti
kai: ty :-)
mb: a perceptive observation. thank you.
bre: glad this worked for you. thank you.
Oh, oh...
vanishing
as it touches earth
snowflake
masago: :-)
bill: how beautiful
thank you!
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