Friday, 14 June 2013

Modern Haiku 44.2

no end to his flattery overcooked rice

njegovo laskanje nima konca prekuhan riž

6 comments:

Out of Sight L said...

But you must for Sushi, I love sushi :)

polona said...

guess i should try it once...
:)

Bill said...

This one made me laugh out loud when I read it in MH, and I'm still chuckling.

polona said...

so good to hear, Bill, thanks :-)

jem said...

I'm with Bill - made me laugh - it's so palpable - that sticky weight that can come with words as well as rice!

polona said...

thanks, jem, glad it made you laugh.