Thursday, 29 March 2012

a bumblebee
buzzing in the kitchen
our agitated talk

5 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

enjoyed this juxtaposition, especially within the haiku placement of the occurrence


much love...

Emma Dalloway said...

Hi Polona

Im cruising around my favourite blogs and thrilled to see your bee haiku! I have a real 'thing' for bees :)

I liked Wednesdays too - just how do we grow old gracefully, I wonder?

x Dalloway

Bill said...

The buzzing works both as metaphor and literal detail.

polona said...

glad it worked for you, Gillena, and thanks for the visit

nice to see you around, dalloway ;) i've been drawn back into the haiku world, and though i wasn't sure i wanted to blog again, here i am...

that was my intention, Bill. glad it worked :)

Emma Dalloway said...

it is good to have a break - I am pleased you are still blogging - you write lovely stuff