Beautiful - I can really relate to this - I hope you aren't offended if I say in this one you think in a similar way to me, that connection between the outside and the inside, questions of where the line of influence between wo/man and nature begins and ends.
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Sometimes it feels just like this.
:)
hi Polona,
i might get a bit crtical about this..:)
the sky or the nature is obviously not black and white...the photo could be...
and as Masago says, its a feeling...sometimes all looks so dull and grey..for human's how long does a feeling stay!?
to me - just a few minutes, sometimes hours ...
but as Wordsworth sits in a pensive mood..these feelings come back..and by the sky would have changed its colour!! :)
A very nice photo nonetheless, Polona :)
wishes!
devika
i like the mood in this work. the words fit perfectly : "unanswered call" and a gloomy sky.
the 2 go together so well!
Pretty. Like lace.
well caught polona
john
Morda pa se s sivino, v sivini poglobi nemi odgovor na klic ...
In danes je sonce, čeprav mrzlo piha. Naj ti bo topolo!
A good haiku with, as the Japanese would call it, "aware" - beautiful sadness.
It might be stronger though.
What do you think of the following?
the sky takes on
a deeper shade of grey
unanswered call
Beautiful - I can really relate to this - I hope you aren't offended if I say in this one you think in a similar way to me, that connection between the outside and the inside, questions of where the line of influence between wo/man and nature begins and ends.
Nice in B&W... See You later !
thanks all.
@ devika: you're a funny girl and i like you for that :)
@ patrick: i agree, the feeling is stronger in your suggestion. thanks again
@ jem: why would i be offended - that's a nice compliment ;)
So much said in these precious sentences, perfect photo as always Polona :)
Me -- Funny? Girl??
stop being funny Polona :-)
you are the first one to say I'm funny, i felt often though! :)
and this 'girl(y)' thing -- as I was telling Lorraine -- if a girl could become a woman, or a woman were are girl once -- I am that ;)
But an I!?
questions that I seek an anwswer! :)
nice to have your response-- it does make a difference to me :)
wishes!
devika
This is beautiful Polona. The words and photo a perfect marriage.
fascinating!
Striking photo. Do you need "shade of" in the last line of the English version?
Tudi jaz :))) lepo mi bodi Polona.
prehodila malo tvoj svet haiku... kot vedno krasne sličice. In seveda vedno posebna tudi s svojimi haiku, ki jih krasno dopolnjujejo.
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