Friday, 27 June 2008



grmenje
namrščen obraz
požira nebo

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

No! Tell him he must go away and rain on someone else's day! (Uhmmm, preferably NOT mine, either.)

Masago said...

Grrrr...

Janice Thomson said...

What an awesome sky!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like the darkness here -- my tanka had a cloud today, too. :)

John McDonald said...

enjoyed this
john

Anonymous said...

Oh, I love this! You make me truly visualize a sky-large sullen face,
dictating the weather.

haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...

very good!

your poetry is strong enough to stand alone (without photo) but it is a joy that you combine word and picture!

best wishes,
Angelika

Anonymous said...

ne boš verjela, privoščila sem si kozarec piva, hi, hi, hi

krasna fotka...

dsnake1 said...

awesome!
the white patch does look like a profile of a face. :)

jem said...

Oooo scary and exciting and fantastic. You are getting good things from the sky this week!

Crafty Green Poet said...

very evocative of moody weather

neikka said...

oj, je dober haiku, kaj je dober!

Posnetek pa, kot da ti drobovje trga.

Fajn bodi, Polona.

polona said...

quilly: he did, he did go away... not your place, i hope :0)

masago: pft

janice: thank you

andrew: thank you. i liked what you did in your tanka

john: thank you

cynthia: he didn't last long, though... thank you

angelika: appreciate that. thank you

lucija: na zdravje! jaz ga bom pa zdajle na špansko zmago :)

dsnake: your kind of haiga?
thank you

jem: we did have some interesting sky... thank you

crafty green poet: thank you juliet

neikka: ah, hvala! pozdrav (dobesedno) na tvoj konec!

Tikkis said...

Dramatic!

polona said...

thank you tikkis