Wednesday, 21 May 2008



težki oblaki
počasi se obrne
žerjav

17 comments:

Kai said...

nice

Masago said...

A reflection of a hard day.

Janice Thomson said...

Like the layers to this. Good one Polona.

Anonymous said...

Maybe the crane could move a bit faster and pull the clouds away? IT is pouring rain in Paradise!

Anonymous said...

There are heavy clouds here. But no cranes in sight!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

cloudy dreary day...

Anonymous said...

ne maram dežja. a tokrat mi paše, kot da spira bremena z mene... tako ga občutim tokrat.

zanimivo tole z žerjavom. ja, zna pritegniti pozornost...

naj ti bo lep dan

Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the pairing of the heavy and the slow here.

John McDonald said...

well observed
john

magiceye said...

the heaviness sinks in gradually..

Pat Paulk said...

Such a heavy load it carries. But, unlike most of us it lets it go.
Sorry for my long absence from your wonderful blog.

DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

depresivni posnetek z dezjem in zerjavom, tezka, dvojna depresija:)))

Naj ze pride svetloba in sonce.

neikka

Bruno LoGreco said...

New to your blog - came over from Bart's blog.

Phyllis Hunt McGowan said...

Nature meeting progress...
And I can feel the kind of day that is- slow and weighty.

VILINČEK said...

Tudi name vpliva ta haiku v zelo sivih barvah. Prvič sivina slike, oblačno nebo, drugič žerjav, ki navadno dviguje zelo težke predmete, tudi težka opravila, ki jih sam človek ne zmore.

polona said...

thank you everyone for your comments. they are all appreciated.
a few busy days kept me behind with my responses so...

Anonymous said...

the slow moving crane - very
good - a feeling of heaviness