Tuesday, 30 October 2007



zakopani spomini
reka polna dežja vleče
konce vrbinih vej

17 comments:

Masago said...

Excellent. More rain, eh?

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

beautiful! (has it been raining a lot there?)

Anonymous said...

Looks like muddy water. Hope the memories are less grim.

floots said...

just right
thank you

Crafty Green Poet said...

Lovely, lots of layers there

John McDonald said...

yes excellent

Janice Thomson said...

Oh yes, this is excellent Polona!

get zapped said...

A magical image and moment. Very nice!

DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

Krasen haiku, prav fasciniral me je...

Lepo, polona.

lepo bodi:))

neikka

Anonymous said...

I wish your pics came with sound effects. This looks like it would sound very soothing. And while I'm on the subject of wishing, why not throw in scent? It always smells so good after a rain.

polona said...

masago: thank you and yes, there was more rain (not today, though)

andrew. thank you.
yes, too much if you ask me :)

quilly: well, this water is never clear but yes, it was murkier than usual. as for memories - it depends...

floots: appreciate that. thanks

crafty green poet: thank you.

john: thanks

janice: many thanks.

get zapped: i appreciate that. thank you

neikka: me veseli, da ti je všeč.
hvala ti, objem!

auld b(h)at: you know, i've been thinking on a couple of occasions that it would be great if i could add smell to the post. but you're not missing much in terms of a smell here - this river runs through the city where the photo was taken.

Anonymous said...

In reka teče dalje ... za nas, ki še nismo spomin, vsak dan hitreje ...

Ja, večplasten je ta haiku.

Al

Anonymous said...

zakopani spomini se zbudijo, na dan ki je tukaj...

kako pomenljiv zapis... se poistovetim z reko življenja...

Naj ti dan mineva v sozvočju s tistim, kar ti je drago in sveto.

Objem, Lucija

polona said...

alenka: ja, res je... kako čas teče... in še kaj...
hvala, objem v mrzlo noč!

polona said...

lucija: hvala za lepe misli... ja, ta reka je lahko marsikaj...
nadvse lep večer ti želim!

gautami tripathy said...

Geometrical patterns in the water! Loved it!

polona said...

gautami: you would, wouldn't you as a math teacher :)
thank you