Saturday, 6 October 2007



jesenski dež
briše odseve
v luži
spet mislim na
minulo ljubezen

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

To zna biti pa hudo...

Upam, da te je vsaj malo sonca pri meni razvedrilo... Če ne, pa en objem za lahko noč, Lucija

polona said...

hehe lucija, včasih si dovolim tudi malce pesniške svobode :)
hvala za objem in ti ga vračam!

Anonymous said...

Perfectly perfect.
In my case, the memories are distored as well. This poem makes me sigh...

Masago said...

Deep, in a shallow kind of way. :-)

floots said...

just right
(captures that sadness perfectly)
thank you

Anonymous said...

What Auld Hat said. Plus, you chose the perfect words for this picture.

DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

Draga polona,

te dneve sem zamemarila vse bloge, ni bilo časa, še PC-ja nisem odprla nekaj dni ali zgolj za čekiranje pošte, ki sem jo MORALA prebrati.

Krasna fotka, verzi pa vredni pesnice, polni otožnosti.

drži se!

Objem, neikka.

John McDonald said...

nice one polona
john

Crafty Green Poet said...

well observed and clever.

VILINČEK said...

Vsaka kaplja naj
izbriše le temno sled,
svetlo ohrani!

Utrip na tvojo sličico in haiku :)

Naj ti ta nedelja prinese kaj lepega.

Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...

My but what we find ourselves reflecting upon. Good one, Polona.

Tikkis said...

Not any frogs seen?

Ps. Sent your blog-address to Mr Kari Klemela, as well as Borut's...

Janice Thomson said...

This is excellent Polona - a perfect blend of photo and words.

polona said...

hat: thank you and i'm sorry and we all have distorted memories, methinks...

masago: now that's a clever oxymoron :)

floots: yep... and sometimes we just need to indulge in it...
cheers

quilly: what i said to auld hat. and thank you for your contribution :)

neikka: saj razumem, žal mi je le, da mi ni zneslo biti tam.
hvala ti in objem!
(drugače sem čisto v redu)

john: thank you

crafty green poet: thank you.

vilinček: hvala za prisrčen haiku :)
vse lepo, ne garaj preveč ;-)

don: all kind of nonsense, i reckon.
thank you

tikkis: not on that occasion.
thank you (i think)

janice: i appreciate that, thank you.