poletni zahod
lastovka poškropi
svoj odsev
apologies for less than excellent photo... in this case haiku came first while i was watching martins dart about the pond, skimming the surface, touching their reflections. this pic was the best i could manage at the time...
19 comments:
a perfectly fine pic. and sprinkles are always nice.
I think it's wonderful -- I also like how you can see a person in the back ground. Don't know why, but it gives me the feeling of being there.
"poletni zahod" - ja se preveša v drugo polovico to naše poletje. Danes nekoliko hladneje kot sicer, vsaj v MB rahlo dežuje...
Tudi sama se često počutim kot lastovka, ko zrem v svoj odsev...
Kako znaš ujeti trenutek, nianso mene, mojega čutenja... In potem vsa vprašanja o čutenju duš postanejo brezpredmetna...
Bodi dobro, imej lep vikend... Če ne bom ravno tu, bom tu naokoli...
Objem, Lucija
excellent
john
Love this one, Polona. Masterful!
a clever swallow ;))).
i'd do the same, sometimes,
a.
I hate when I "sprinkle" on myself. It's Friday, I'm sorry.
So gentle.
Oh Polona I love this one. Excellent.
hat: that's kind of you to say. thank you
andrew: well, thank you. i feel better about posting this now :)
masago: thanks
lucija: morda se pa ti znaš vživeti v trenutek in se najti v njem...
ja, hladneje... sedim tu v trenerki in mi ni nič toplo :(
tudi ti se imej lepo, kjerkoli že boš!
objem!!
john: thank you, john.
don: most kind. thank you.
aleks: who wouldn't?
hvala za obisk ;)
pat: it's not been the best of fridays for me but still... what'sfriday got to do with sprinkling oneself?
get zapped: thank you
janice: most kind, thank you.
Absolutely nothing. I can sprinkle on myself all 7 days of the week. I was just in giddy mood because no more work this week. Sorry you had a bad Friday.
love your photo and the wrod gives a spark
If I could hold a camera and see the way you do I would have been over the moon
Nasra
thanks for the explanation, pat. well, it's weekend and i've had a much better time, thank you
nasra: why thank you. you are a woman of many talents yourself.
photography is just something i like doing and i'm usually not happy with less than good
lastovka poškroši svoj odsev.. tako ko mi, ljudje, ki si zatiskamo oči pred bistvom, mnogokrat nismo le naivni, a dejansko splepi. škropimo dejstva...
polona,
vem da sem radovedna, a me zanima, se poklicno ukvarjaš z angleščino? ker tako lepo spojiš haiku v angleščino. ali obrano, saj ne vem, v katerem jeziku ga prej napišeš :))))
se opravičujem, škrat mi zagode in se zatipkam pri vsaki 2. besedi. treba bo spat :)
saj je kul, pucca... tudi jaz delam tipkarske kar naprej :)
drugače pa mi je angleščina v bistvu le hobi in čisto osebni izziv. v šali sem že večkrat rekla, da me je posvojila napačna muza (morda pa ne?), saj govori angleško. nerodna reč pravzaprav...
kakor se morda sliši čudno, večina haikujev najprej nastane v angleščini, šele potem pride slovenska verzija.
oo, zanimivo :)
Wow. Such a striking idea. This makes me want to sprinkle my reflection somewhere. It seems such a carefree thing to do, so self assured. Great!
And sometimes catching the words before they escape has to come before catching the perfect photo!
jem, i'm pleased you liked it.
i always enjoy your thougtful comments.
and you're right of course about catching the words :)
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