Sunday, 17 June 2007



sunek vetra
veščec se oprime
niza cvetov

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

Gorgeous!

Masago said...

...and really hanging on. Nice.

Anonymous said...

... in oko obstane in dih zadrhti in...

Lepo, Polona. Imej lep dan, Lucija

jem said...

Lovely. So many layers of strength and gentleness in these words coupled with the image.

Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...

Lovely! How do you do it in so few words, Polona?

Pat Paulk said...

What better place to hold onto in the wind? Excellent!!

aleks said...

mehko in varno zavetje... lepo

get zapped said...

We all have moments of clinging, don't we.

DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

Hoho, veščec in to!

Sem morala kar pomisliti, kdo bi to bil, ta vščec:))

Lušno, lučno, iznajdljivo, veščin partner...


polona, vedno se česa naučim pri tebi.

objem, neikka.

polona said...

quilly: thank you!

masago: indeed. thank you.

lucija: hvala.
objem!

jem: many thanks. the layers are not so obvious...

don: thank you. well, because i can't do it in many words... ;)

pat: oh, i could think of a few :)
thank you!

aleks: saj to vsi iščemo, ne?
hvala.

get zapped: i suppose so. and we have to learn to let go...

neikka: ne vem, nekako se mi je zdelo bolj primerno, ne da bi namerno hotela poudariti spol...
hvala za obisk, objem!

Anonymous said...

Vešča stičišču
dveh nizov belih cvetov
doda zlati prah.

Če dodam "u" in "l", iz kombinacije črk za verfikacijo nastane beseda: joyful.

Bodi vesela, Polona!

Anonymous said...

Vešča se je sesula v prah in se pozabila podpisati: Al

polona said...

joyful... lepo!

joj, alenka, saj bi vedela, kdo je ta vešča, tudi če se ne bi podpisala ;)

lep večer ti želim, pozdrav!

Bill said...

sudden wind
a squirrel clutches
a swaying branch

This was in the second issue of Clouds Peak (now defunct). Yours is mnore delicate than mine.

polona said...

perhaps, bill.
but i see it as just another proof that it's hard to invent hot water ;)
thank you.