or maybe she left and he's still twisting the umbrellas not sure what's his next move, I love that you tell so many stories with very little words, it's gift you have
the thing i like about haiku is how a reader can complete the story (or several) based on their own perception and experience.
ideally, good haiku doesn't spell things out but providse just enough information for everyone to create their own vision which may or may not be the same as the author's
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He's been stood up and still he waits she likes umbrellas in her drinks
quite possibly, Lorraine ;-)
or maybe she left and he's still twisting the umbrellas not sure what's his next move, I love that you tell so many stories with very little words, it's gift you have
I like this one!
Makes one wonder.
thanks again, ladies.
the thing i like about haiku is how a reader can complete the story (or several) based on their own perception and experience.
ideally, good haiku doesn't spell things out but providse just enough information for everyone to create their own vision which may or may not be the same as the author's
Exquisite!
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