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This is a much superior haiku to the version at the start of March, and I wonder why. Is it more specific and therefore more emotionally engaging? - the actual songs we sang around a campfire - what were they now? Ah such poignant embers of youth
i guess it's more immediate while still retaining the vertical axis - a reminiscence of something that was there but is now gone...
our song . . .she remembers all the words
gentle and romantic... thank you for sharing
long lost friendclinging to snatches of radio song
good response, jem, and i know the feeling... some songs still stir up certain memories
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This is a much superior haiku to the version at the start of March, and I wonder why. Is it more specific and therefore more emotionally engaging? - the actual songs we sang around a campfire - what were they now? Ah such poignant embers of youth
i guess it's more immediate while still retaining the vertical axis - a reminiscence of something that was there but is now gone...
our song . . .
she remembers
all the words
gentle and romantic... thank you for sharing
long lost friend
clinging to snatches
of radio song
good response, jem, and i know the feeling... some songs still stir up certain memories
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