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"compression gloves" is not a phrase you'll often find in a poem. Real pathos in this, and a real kick as well.
a friend once told me a little about what it was like when his hands were burnt in a pan fire... glad i was able to convey some of it in this poem
these finger joints tight gloves Understood. _m
skin graftone by one the fingersflex through the pain
Beautiful contrasts - the heat and cold, pain and relief - so well handled.
exactly, jem... appreciate your stopping by
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"compression gloves" is not a phrase you'll often find in a poem. Real pathos in this, and a real kick as well.
a friend once told me a little about what it was like when his hands were burnt in a pan fire...
glad i was able to convey some of it in this poem
these finger joints tight gloves
Understood. _m
skin graft
one by one the fingers
flex through the pain
Beautiful contrasts - the heat and cold, pain and relief - so well handled.
exactly, jem... appreciate your stopping by
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