Tuesday, 12 March 2013

how does a blackbird know
when to sing?
snowdrops in the snow


alternative version (with thanks to Bill):


how does a blackbird
know when to sing?
snowdrops in the snow
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2 comments:

Bill said...

Just a thought: Would "know" work at the start of line 2?

14/3/13 15:16
polona said...

a great suggestion, Bill, thank you

14/3/13 17:50

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